求英语好的人能够帮我纠错我的英语日记。Todayisasunny
Today is a sunny day. I met my father at half past seven,because he would ta the flight at 12:40pm today.I ate breakfast with him at KFC.Though my fahter will go home today,I don't feel sad any more.Because I feel very sleepy.I just want to finish my brea
Today is a sunny day. （这一句可以直接说：It is fine and sunny today.）I met my father at half past seven,because he would ta the flight at 12:40pm today.I ate breakfast with him at KFC.Though my fahter will go home today(这一句是不是意思表达错误，应该是你爸爸准备离开家：Though my father will leave home today),I don't feel sad any more.(any more的意思是又，再，所以应该不是我再也不会伤心，而应该是一点也不伤心： I don't feel sad at all.)Because I feel very sleepy.I just want to finish my breakfast as far as possible.(这两句的时态应该都是指早晨，所以建议都改为过去式。)After that,I went to school.At 4:30pm,O yan give us a meeting about our comprehensive evaluation.（这句话首先是时态有点问题，然后是主谓不一致,然后就是举行会议的表述：At 4:30pm,O yan held a meeting about our comprehensive evaluation.） She also tell us about major project.（时态和主谓不一致：She also told us about major project.)It is the first time I can perceive pressure.What is project?I have never thought about the meaning of project to me.(前面几句中间project是想表达什么？是计划还是别的？有点意思表述不太清楚)If I have a chance,and I have courage,then I will try doing that.