- 看看这篇能打几分，谢谢。TWE29，人类活动是破坏地球还是改善地
- TWE29，人类活动是破坏还是改善地球。
It seems difficult for people to reach assent on whether Earth is being harmed by human activities or not. As far as I am concerned, I think human are doing harm to our homeland. And eventually, Earth will do harm to people too.
As i
- 少用一些I,比如第一段的I think就可以去掉不要.第2段有个I believe可以改成it is believed that.有一些句子要改一改,比如with nobody using it可以改为without using it. 文章大体还行,就是太主观,太多单句(来两三句复合句也好啊),还有要避免一些小错误. 这篇大概4.5分左右把