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- There is no denying the fact that job hunting has been a grave blem. In recent years, college graduates' job hunting obviously become harder than before. More graduates can not search a work matching with their professional knowledge, and even more gradua
- 第一句：job hunting has been a grave blem
-->job hunting has become a grave social problem.
第二句：-->it obviously becomes harder than before for college graduates to hunt a job.
第三句：More and more graduates can't get a work relating to their professional knoweledge, and even a job.
第四句：the difficulty in job hunting is caused......
r one thing-->One thing,
6.times-->time
r another thing-->Another thing,
may not be enough for them--->they maybe not enough for them.
9.lead--->leads
10.on the one hand--->on one hand
llage officials
12 study for their major--->study their majors
13.going abroad may also be a good idea.
以上是我的拙见！仅供参考！