- 评估下雅思作文能拿几分?能提供修改意见可加分题目是:Increa
- 题目是:reasing the price of fuel is the best way to solve environmental problems. To what extent do you agree?
An issue that has aroused extensive debate today is whether increasing the price of fuel is the best way to solve environmental problems. In my es
- 建议。第一段。都是用了很滥用的套路。近年来。。。热点。在我给出我的观点之前我试图从两方面来论述之类的。（废话。没有量）
第2-3段出了滥用没有含金量的低级俗气的套句外，还有非常多的语法错误。逻辑很混乱。（请别生气，我就是说我的个人看法）
举例说明‘It is evident that some people will choose other energy source if increasing the price of fuel; therefore, the air pollution will reduce.
if引导的句子是从句。而从句必须有主谓宾。可是你看看你的if 后面有句子吗？if increasing the price of fuel;
再者，the air pollution will reduce.
这里必须用被动语态。airpollutionwillbereduced.因为是carsorpeoplewillreduceairpollution.反过来就是被动了。想要高分快看看我空间 看看我空间日志还有照片。