- "withfocuson"可以这么用吗?请看看我的用法有没有问题
- 请看看我的用法有没有问题?
I che this college to continue my study due to the wide spectrum of research topics it covers with focus on 某某方面.
- 首先,是个病句。
due to the wide spectrum of research topics it covers with focus on 把due to换成owing to更好,不换当然也凑合。
关键在于topics后面又用了it, 应该换成which或者that,形成定语从句。不管是due to还是owing to后面不能接句子的,只能是名词和修饰名词的定语从句。
最后focus本身就可以用作动词。不需要cover
句子改成:I chose this college to continue my study owing to its wide spectrum of research topics which focus on 某某方面.
(这里which指代research topics,毕竟不是范围集中于,而是研究课题关注于,集中于)