英语好的来检查下Youknow...whenyou'reyoun
You know...when you're young,everything feels li the end of the world.It's not.It's just beginning.You might have to meet a few more jerks...but one day you're going to meet a boy who treats you the way that you deserve to be treated.Like the sun rises an
你的这段话比较口语,可以不那么讲究,我把最显然的给你挑一挑,因为英文好了以后,不会犯一些简单错误是不犯的. You know...when you're young,ANYthing(WILL MAKE YOU) feels like (IT IS )the end of the world. It's not. It's just(THR) beginning. You might have to meet a few more jerks...but one day you're going to meet a boy who treats you the way that you deserve to be treated. Like the sun rises and sets with you.!